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Moodboard

Shooting Script

EXT. Woods. Day

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Moonwing Tindergreen is sat between the trees enjoying a meditation. As the shot fades in, a flute begins to play in the background. As the music flows, Moonwing continues to sway his arms and legs.

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A voiceover of Moonwing’s voice can be heard as he continues his meditation.

Moonwing

You can be in the world and use the thing of the world.

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Moonwing touches the leaves of a plant.

Moonwing

But you should not be attached to those things, that is all. It’s just using them as tools.

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Over the shoulder shot of Moonwing looking into a pond.

Moonwing

Also the ego and the senses. The ego is the cement that holds the five elements and the whole creation together. Without ego, cosmic ego, there would be no creation at all.

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Close up of Moonwing, his eyes are close but concentrated.

Moonwing

All of these things are tools for the soul to come in to this world and experience the things of the world, and find fulfilment and completion.

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Bird’s eye view shot spiralling above Moonwing.

Moonwing

We should see them as tools, emotions also.

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Moonwing sways between the leaves blowing into him next to the pond.

Moonwing

If we don’t attach to it we can use it just as a tool. If we attach to it, it overtakes our mind and drives us crazy. We lose control and don’t know what we’re doing anymore.

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Moonwing is sat in a tree.

Moonwing

It’s all how you look at it. That’s the tricky thing…But that’s the secret.

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A child is running through a forrest, he is making pretend gun noises as he runs.

Child

Pow pow pow..... pow pow

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Mooningwing becomes annoyed at the child as he tries come to one with the earth. He then confronts the child.

Moonwing

Child please, let me take you on a journey of self discovery that will teach how war is not fun and games.

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Montage of Moonwing and the child throughout the forrest.

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Child

Thanks Moonwing, you've taught me so much.

Moonwing

Run along my friend, you know where to find me!

Fade to credits 

First Draft Feedback

1. use more variation in editing

2. use a backing track to keep the audience interested

3. make there more of a storyline